This has filled in the place where flat wood dropouts used to hold and I can't be more thankful since that other project stopped. Incredibly dark themes, but still kept lighthearted that is very hard to pull off. Great job!
Thank you so much!! I honestly didn't think many people liked Flatwood, so it's really flattering to hear that! And thank you for the compliment - I try really hard to incorporate both light and dark in all of my work, so I'm glad it's working out!! There's a lot more love and horror for you guys in the future xx
Hey also I wanted to say 2 things your work nothing more said there are 3 favorite characters it's on your vn that caught my attention it's Seth and Reuben and the base character even if Seth thinks with sex~ hehehe and also I want to help you but I forget that I don't draw at all so I'll pass on hehehe it's all good work ^^
I hope your VN Season May will attract a lot of people even if it's NSFW well I don't know if that's it you'll tell me afterwards but (even if it doesn't bother me :/ I can't wait to see more) so take your time and ask for help not from me but from the world who will see your work if you know what I mean :)
Thank you so much for the comments!! And thank you for offering help, that's so sweet!! Everything in my visual novel has come from me alone - the characters, the music, the story - it's a lot more work to do it by myself, but I'm determined to keep at it!! And yes, it's definitely going to be NSFW lolol. Penises and balls and all that jazz. NSFW stuff has been a part of my life for a long time and it's even got me through a whole bunch of shiz when I was lonely and depressed.
But thank you for the lovely comments and kind words, I really appreciate it, you made my day! And I hope Season May gets bigger, I just have to keep putting in the work!! <3 <3
Very intriguing so far! Cute characters and an interesting plot that immediately drew me in. I very much look forward to seeing and learning more about the world of Karlight in future updates.
Thank you for reading!! Trust me, there’s a whole bunch of things to learn - I’ve even added two individual learning segments in the next update, just to explain some of Kalight’s strange concepts! 🩷🩷
I liked Day 1. The world is interesting, the characters are enjoyable and i am looking forward to what is next.
However, i fell like the snarky comments and the use of slurs in some places can really break the immersion. Using them sparingly can enhance certain moments, not drag them down.
Thank you so much for reading, and I’m glad you’re looking forward to the next update (which is virtually finished!!)!
Yeah, I’ve had others in the past suggest for me to use less curse words. I’ll double check my usage of them before the next update! I just tend to use them a lot as that’s my own vocabulary in real life (I swear a lot)
I loved every part of it, (especially the train conductor part, wonder what cake he got in the end) can't wait for future updates. Let me give Reuben a hug, that boy needs affection! Also, CONFETTI! Yay! thank you for sharing this story with us and with such lovevly music to enjoy it too!
Very interesting! 😊 xour VN has a LOT of potential as it's extremely original with a strong concept and told in just as unique a way, which might I add, is a welcomed break from the regular hubbub of the day-to-day "woe is me" MC 😅
I would however like to suggest altering the intro, if ever so slightly. Something to more fluidly introduce us to the universe, for while xou do in fact disclose information as the tale progresses, I personally found it a little difficult to get into the groove until we meet Seth 🙂
But still, great work! ☺️ I like what xou've written so far, as I can tell there's a lot of passion put into it, so I look forward to where this story might take us~ 😌
Thank you so much for the compliments!! You’re right, the intro was a little bit discombobulating for sure. I’ll have to update it and find a way to explain more/ease the reader into the world, I just left it like that to aid the sense of mystery if that makes sense! But maybe too much mystery lolol
Wow! The writing is honestly so beautiful. The story alone is so though out and executed really well. I was invested! Not to mention the characters are really lovable and their designs are awesome. You can tell that the creator really poured their heart and soul into making this and I couldn't be more grateful that I got to experience it. 10/10, can't wait for the new updates!
Thank you so much, charrxv!! I've put so many years of emotions into this - and I'm so happy you appreciate it. It really means the world to me. My stories have saved me so many times up until now, and to hear you be so kind about my work fills me with joy. Thank you!! <3 <3 <3
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This has filled in the place where flat wood dropouts used to hold and I can't be more thankful since that other project stopped. Incredibly dark themes, but still kept lighthearted that is very hard to pull off. Great job!
Thank you so much!! I honestly didn't think many people liked Flatwood, so it's really flattering to hear that! And thank you for the compliment - I try really hard to incorporate both light and dark in all of my work, so I'm glad it's working out!! There's a lot more love and horror for you guys in the future xx
So to start the update and really not bad BUT HOWEVER I don't know if it was on purpose but he made sexual jokes it was hilarious xD
PLS DAY 3 :)
Lots of gay sex jokes, yes!! Thank you for reading!! And yes, I’m working on Day 3 right now 🩷🩷
Hey also I wanted to say 2 things your work nothing more said there are 3 favorite characters it's on your vn that caught my attention it's Seth and Reuben and the base character even if Seth thinks with sex~ hehehe and also I want to help you but I forget that I don't draw at all so I'll pass on hehehe it's all good work ^^
I hope your VN Season May will attract a lot of people even if it's NSFW well I don't know if that's it you'll tell me afterwards but (even if it doesn't bother me :/ I can't wait to see more) so take your time and ask for help not from me but from the world who will see your work if you know what I mean :)
Thank you so much for the comments!! And thank you for offering help, that's so sweet!! Everything in my visual novel has come from me alone - the characters, the music, the story - it's a lot more work to do it by myself, but I'm determined to keep at it!! And yes, it's definitely going to be NSFW lolol. Penises and balls and all that jazz. NSFW stuff has been a part of my life for a long time and it's even got me through a whole bunch of shiz when I was lonely and depressed.
But thank you for the lovely comments and kind words, I really appreciate it, you made my day! And I hope Season May gets bigger, I just have to keep putting in the work!! <3 <3
Very intriguing so far! Cute characters and an interesting plot that immediately drew me in. I very much look forward to seeing and learning more about the world of Karlight in future updates.
Thank you for reading!! Trust me, there’s a whole bunch of things to learn - I’ve even added two individual learning segments in the next update, just to explain some of Kalight’s strange concepts! 🩷🩷
I liked Day 1. The world is interesting, the characters are enjoyable and i am looking forward to what is next.
However, i fell like the snarky comments and the use of slurs in some places can really break the immersion. Using them sparingly can enhance certain moments, not drag them down.
Besides that, I liked it.
Thank you so much for reading, and I’m glad you’re looking forward to the next update (which is virtually finished!!)!
Yeah, I’ve had others in the past suggest for me to use less curse words. I’ll double check my usage of them before the next update! I just tend to use them a lot as that’s my own vocabulary in real life (I swear a lot)
The artstyle and tone are really familiar, you wouldn't happen to have anything to do with Flatwoods Dropouts, would you?
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This sounds interesting! Any plan for an android version?
it's just great I watched the beginning to the end now I'm waiting to see the rest very nice work in any case :)
a planned sequel ? :
what do you mean? :0
Thank you so much!! I’m working hard to get the next chapter out asap ❤️
Well, that answers my question HEHE :)
I loved every part of it, (especially the train conductor part, wonder what cake he got in the end) can't wait for future updates. Let me give Reuben a hug, that boy needs affection! Also, CONFETTI! Yay! thank you for sharing this story with us and with such lovevly music to enjoy it too!
HAHAHA, yeah that conductor was really funny to write. I love random stuff! Thank you so much for your comment!! ❤️
(P.S. Reuben would probably disintegrate if you hugged him)
it's weird but the gud kind of weird looking forward to future updates
thank you!! Everything’s totally fucked ❤️
I NEED THE ANDROID VERSION SOMETIME SOON 😭 😭 😭
I used joiplay for now but yes apk would be good for next builds
Very interesting! 😊 xour VN has a LOT of potential as it's extremely original with a strong concept and told in just as unique a way, which might I add, is a welcomed break from the regular hubbub of the day-to-day "woe is me" MC 😅
I would however like to suggest altering the intro, if ever so slightly. Something to more fluidly introduce us to the universe, for while xou do in fact disclose information as the tale progresses, I personally found it a little difficult to get into the groove until we meet Seth 🙂
But still, great work! ☺️ I like what xou've written so far, as I can tell there's a lot of passion put into it, so I look forward to where this story might take us~ 😌
Thank you so much for the compliments!! You’re right, the intro was a little bit discombobulating for sure. I’ll have to update it and find a way to explain more/ease the reader into the world, I just left it like that to aid the sense of mystery if that makes sense! But maybe too much mystery lolol
But again, thank you! ❤️
I had fun reading this good story looking forwards to updates
Thank you so much!! ❤️❤️
refreshing writing, weird ass world and gay sex, I'm in
Hahaha, thank you for the compliments! ❤️❤️❤️
Wow! The writing is honestly so beautiful. The story alone is so though out and executed really well. I was invested! Not to mention the characters are really lovable and their designs are awesome. You can tell that the creator really poured their heart and soul into making this and I couldn't be more grateful that I got to experience it. 10/10, can't wait for the new updates!
Thank you so much, charrxv!! I've put so many years of emotions into this - and I'm so happy you appreciate it. It really means the world to me. My stories have saved me so many times up until now, and to hear you be so kind about my work fills me with joy. Thank you!! <3 <3 <3