ok not sure what i'm supposed to feel but okay, it was an experience.
So, just to know, is it the end of the story ? Or do you plan to pursue it ? If so, well good luck on that ! You got something here, a worldbuilding and interesting premice.
Welp base on the comment alone tell me it gonna be a blast but....... mostly really my mental health might not be able to handle what come to me if I may play/read it. But doesn't mean I won't be tackling it, just need the right time to get to it.
but hey if I tackle it today with my current health and I fell in the spiral pit of hell. I think kalemsight might be able to bring me back from the pit it self XD ( I'm sorry but it to hilarious not to mention it when I stumble upon it XD )
keep up the good work and always priorities your health if it getting worse. Have a nice long rest for this master piece I might tackled in the future💕
oh, im sorry, i mainly made the comment because the creator deleted the socials originally meant to advertise the new VN, i was concerned and didnt know how to express it that time so i masked it in sarcasm. I didnt mean to make it come out this way, i sincerely apologize to you and Kideshi.
Praying to the heavens above that you aint dead rn, cuz if you is. Then istg i will pull you out the firey pits of satan, i will personally drag you out of them lava rivers myself to finish this game lil bro. Demons will DIE, Lucifer himself will be MORTIFIED of the horrors i am about to unleash upon them. 🙏
Here lies the body of Kideshi, presumably born no sooner than 2005 and no later than 1990. As a humble fan of his work, I shall mourn the creator of the game, a game he can never finish. I think we can all agree that his work has touched all of our hearts, and could have touched the hearts of others. He was taken too soon, and now we may have been left on a cliffhanger. I hope death may guide him peacefully to the afterlife. And whoever has access to his hard drive, please, in honor of his memory, finish the work he can never finish; I think that only then he can have peace.
He is probably still alive but just moving on or too busy with his life or something. Or he will return with another game under different account in a few years like how he move on from Flatwood drop-out to create this game.
prolly. but you know how people say “chat is dead” on discord if theres no one chatting or no activity? Well this is basically that but with an account, thats why i said the account name not his real name (because i dont know his real name) so allat is just a joke. But i am sorrowful as i really wanted to finish the game…
Hey, man. The vn was amazing, i loved how you wrote each and every characters personality, i also loved how you named b man's cafe the semicolon cafe because the semicolon is a symbol of mental health and suicide awareness since he suffered from depression before. I cant wait for day 5! And also take your time, because quality takes time. But if you havnet already, can you make a social media account where you post updates about the game? I dont wanna sound paranoid, which i very much am, but its been three months and ive been very worried. I hope this doesnt put much pressure on you though, i just want to voice out my concern because im kinda alone and its rare for me to see an actual, good, Visual Novel that distracts me from that.
Hello kalemsight, the one who brought me back from the depths of Hell!!
Thank you so very much for your amazing compliments!!! And I'm so glad you noticed all the small little details I put into the visual novel!! Sometimes I'm not sure if anyone gets them - I wasn't even sure if anyone had pressed the "detonate" button until a few months ago lol
Naww... I totally get you. I'm going through a lot of stuff too, and I'm always alone... hence why I haven't updated the visual novel in a few months... I've been trying to stay away from it and block it out of my mind because it hurts to think about... but uh, I'm about to make a post explaining everything!! So please stay tuned for that!! And thank you for even showing a tiny bit of concern for me and my art. I will forever appreciate your enthusiasm and your worry for me. I will never forget it!! <3 <3 <3
Aww, I'm so glad I made you feel appreciated! And I don't know if this was because of the episode, but seeing that you replied to this and my last comment actually made me jump in glee, hahaha. But, anyways, if it hurts too much to think about, you could always take a hiatus until you feel better. But if it persists for too long, you could consider giving the project to someone else to finish. Because you should always prioritize your mental health over a game. These are one of the times where you don't push yourself too hard since it always makes you worse rather than better. So what I'm trying to say is, take your time, but if there isn't enough time, you could always give that time to someone else. <3
Naww, i’m so glad!! I just submitted a post about it just now!! I’m going to be moving on to another exciting project! But i will be keeping many things from Season May. Not all of it will be lost! My characters and my stories will always stay with me… and yes, that is true! Giving the story to someone else could be a wonderful idea, and i would feel awful just giving up on it. But just like the reason i make everything on my own, i could never give my characters or stories over to someone else… it would truly be like ripping my heart out!! i’ve spent so much time alone and with only my characters to keep me alive… i could never part with them or give them to someone. they’re like my children, if you know what i mean. essential parts of my suffering, and an essential part of my identity… but as i said, when i move on to another project, all will not be forgotten… ❤️❤️
and thank you for the comment, i appreciate it!! ❤️
Aww man, does that mean it'll get discontinued? I really wanted to see the ending of it, but that's alright, i understand, and i get what you mean. Just as long as you feel that it's the right decision, then it's the right decision. Also, I can't wait to see or possibly play your other projects in the future. I can tell by your experiences you can make a great angst story, hahaha. 🫶
I created my account just to comment here. I loved this game so much😭😭 it's so bad that finished, I really hope that you upload more times in future (I so sad to not know your work before because I would love to know you) . I loved your work please don't stop, I would love if I could interact with you because you apper to be a lovely person and this is story is making me anxious because I want to know more about. Good work (sorry if is difficult to read, my English isn't very good)
Thank you LionLost!!! You are so lovely!! I'm sorry for the late reply. I so very much appreciate you making an account to comment - sometimes I forget that people play the game and don't comment, so I kind of anticipate the comments mostly. I'm just about to make a post, so please stay tuned for that!! And I'm so flattered that you think I'm a good person - I try, haha! <3 <3 <3
And don't worry, your English is just fine to me ;)
You're alive !! 😭😭😭 thanks for everything, I'm glad that you think my English is fine, I really try... but I'd like to know, I didn't find the Spotify's playlist ;-; could send the link??? I really want to listen the songs that helped you create this incredible world.
Thanks for reply <3 <3 <3 the time is just fine, the important is that try to
Oh, it's not often i find games that hit.. That close to the heart. I have too much emotions that i can't convey in comments, but i'd really wish to. It feels painful to relate on so much levels with some of the characters.
Please feel free to convey said emotions, I'd love to hear them! Sorry I'm a bit late, haha. And yes - the characters are all very uh... troubled. Not in a stereotypical trauma-dump way, but a uh... sophisticated way. I think. Hope. Lol <3 And I'm so glad it hit close to your heart, cause I ripped out mine and put it in this game lol <3
holy fucking shit i came here expecting next from nothin and all of a sudden i'm fuckin blasted with some of the most well written scenes (especially the depressive ones) that i've ever seen!! it easily became my favorite vn lmao
great job man, i fucking adore your style and i CAN'T wait to see the next update!
Thank you gakomi!!!! That is such high praise!! I'm so humbled by your compliment!! I'm so happy you enjoyed my art. I worked so hard on it, and it makes me smile knowing that it's one of your faves!!! <3 <3
When I was looking for a novel to play, I came across this game, and the first thing that surprised and attracted me was the concept of the main character: “A fox who bleeds from his ears and nose.” I was very attracted to this, and without thinking twice, I downloaded it. Then I passed it, and I was surprised that it was horror because I didn’t look at the tags initially and didn’t know that it was psychological horror, not just horror. The scene in the cave left an indelible mark on me. I then walked for several more days and had that same scene in my head. The OST is amazing. I'm not listening to it. I'm really looking forward to the next days. The story of Neo and Seth is very interesting. The author needs more patience and strength. I really want to plunge into this world again!
Thank you so, so much for taking the time to read my visual novel!!! I'm so sorry if the horror aspects caught you off guard - and I hope it didn't leave a negative impact on you!! But hey... I'm glad you got a few memories out of it! That scene in the cave was extremely important to me - and one that I am very proud of writing. It's a very familiar scene in my real life, and I'm glad I was able to put it in this visual novel and show my readers what mental health can look like!! <3 <3
And thank you for the compliment!! I worked so incredibly hard on the OST... so so many hours lmao <3
Thank you for the work done on the game, you shouldn’t regret that it turned out great, it’s worth saying that the horror element was really scary, you perfectly prepared the player for this moment with music and conversations with the characters, although I’m not a connoisseur of visual novels (after all, I’ve only played a few novels) As for me, you approached something like a doki-doki literary club. I also really want to note that the scene in the cave is, for me, one of the best scenes in the game, probably because of the turning point that occurs at this time.Now, you may not believe me, but I considered this moment and thought that at the time of developing this scene you were not going through the best moments in your life (or it’s just a bias towards the way people look with various psychological problems)
Not going to lie, I never comment on any vn I play (I play a lot) but this one is honestly one of the most enthralling stories I've read in a long time and I absolutely love the art! I binged the entire thing and now I'm eager for the next update! Amazing work! (P.S Android build worked perfectly I believe)
Thank you so much!!! I wasn't sure if the android version worked or not, so I'm glad it did! I can't believe I even figured it out lol. And thank you for the comment!!! I appreciate it more than you know!! <3 <3
AHHHHH I'M SO LATE, AGAIN! but my usual monthly comment after an update has arrived!
First of all, I love all the changes you did even if minimal, it's really is a pain in the ass if you've already got so many sprites to edit and I assure you we'll be happy even if for you it doesn't look quite right since after all you as their creator will see details that most of us won't notice. Second, I'm astonished with all the backgrounds that you made and 13 music tracks! You really made a lot of work for this update.
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Now for the story: You almost made me had a heart attack, heck that disappearing act that Reuben did and the upcoming alphas that might put a stop to all Neo did, almost made me think we'd lose him. I was surprised that Neo took out an omega like Darhunt in such a short time and (love the sun dagger design) thanks for another 101 of the Kalight body functions 'cause if I didn't know that I'd though Darhunt was a goner. Is Neo secretly a past Alpha or Omega or something much more endearing? More to the 101 biology of the Kalightians about their organs, much appreciated but I do have a question, Is their blood some kind of acid? that also tasted good or bad depending on the person and maybe what they eat.
MmmGHhhMm Reuben's scene... I'm with Neo with this one, it's a bit soon but it's not like we ate, took or drank what was in front of us, they were just helping a buddy blacking a whole colony through a helping hand. I'm so glad Neo was able to reason with Reuben 'cause if he didn't come with the Jaw Divers I'd manually put an option to stay with Reub and make the game end as one of the endings, glad that wasn't the case.
Ahh the finally a background that isn't a shade of gray, Purple Flesh Colony here we are! Shame we didn't spend as much time in it like we did in the Black Colony, I really liked the design of the city and it's not as blinding as the White Colony, fortunately B man's bar is just the perfect place to shield my eyes from being blind. Now I wanna know how popular B man's bar is since his blood is so tasteful and the ambience is so moody in such a good way that it'd be like a chill café. Love our interaction with "Fanboy" Darhunt (Only for S'Ferro) and the little bed time story Seth told us.
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I'm not sure what to expect in the next updates since now they have a lot of open options. I won't bother you with the misspellings since there's almost none... depending if you're using American English over Britannic English.
Love from Bon <3 <3 <3 (I'll try to finish the "dancingseth.png" for next update and maybe add something more mmm, Until Next Time!)
Hello, my wonderful friend Bon!!! I'm so sorry I haven't replied... I've been going through a lot as usual... and I'll explain all in a post very soon. But thank you so, so much for your wonderful compliments and comments that I keep getting. Your comments are always one of my favourites to recieve!!!
Their blood is uh, kind of like an acid I guess! But moreso just blood! Or rather a more sophisticated type of blood that's a bit more efficient than ours.
HAHAHA!! Yes, that Reuben scene was honestly really hard to write. Not only because it's so sad... but because I've clearly gone through the same thing. Sitting there, not wanting anything, thinking your life is worthless and better off being over... only for you to get up and live another day, for no reason at all. Just the will to live is enough, without reason. It's quite a powerful scene - I genuinely think it's one of the best ones I've written as most of the time when a character is sad, there'll be a solution - or some sort of quote for the protagonist to lift them up. But here... it's just nothing. And I feel like that's more realistic...
Thank you so so much for the dancing Seth!!! That made my day when I saw it... and thank you so much for all the fan art and little gifts along the way. Honestly, it's what got me through a lot of the updates. I promise my work isn't finished (unless something happens to me out of my control) - and I sincerely hope to keep you as a loving fan.
I'm just about to make a post about a few things... please give it your attention! Of course, you've already done so much for me - I don't expect you to do any more. I honestly love you guys so much, especially you Bon!! <3 <3 <3
Hehehehe, thank you!!! I worked so hard on the soundtrack - I'm so happy you enjoyed it!! "Touch Me Lullaby" is a distorted version of a song I made back in Year 12 when I was going through a lot of mental issues. It's probably the saddest song I've ever written, and I thought putting it right before the possible suicide scene would make a lot of sense!! :3
HAHAHA, I used that for Flatwood Drop-Outs (my first VN) and I had to keep it in. I always loved the idea of answering with "maybe" cause why tf not you know XP
This has quickly become a feel good novel for me 😊 I find myself smiling, and even laughing, with every update. The world is so fascinating and fun to learn about, and while such intricate details would usually make it feel messy, xour style of writing, or perhaps simply the overall delivery of the story, doesn't make it feel strenuous or confusing to read 😌
Xou're doing a great job, btw 🙂 I know, better than most, the struggles of being overly critical on one's self, and while I haven't yet found a better solution other than spending time outside my head, and perhaps receiving encouragement from others, sometimes xou just gotta keep soldiering through! 😋 There are people who love what xou're doing, so just keep doing it! 😉
Thank you so much Phamyne!! I sincerely appreciate your wonderful compliments!! I tried really hard to balance what to explain to the reader and what not to explain - I hope I did an okay job lol!! One piece of advice I would recommend would be to remind yourself of reality and what really matters - a bird's eye view, perhaps. Just know that you're one little spec on the planet with billions of other little specs bustling around - no matter what you do or what you think, the only opinion that matters is yours! And nothing anyone does will have an eternal impact, so don't worry!! you're perfect the way you are <3
If i could rate 5 stars I would but sadly I can't (sad Android user noises) this has really got me invested, you my good person (idk wtf ur pronouns r) have mad the perfect mix of drama randomness and comedy ( people say that random does not equal funny but with this it does) I think that this is one of the most original ideas for an fvn I've seen in a while
P.s. thx for not recycling the good old waking up from a nightmare at the start of the vn that most fvn's have already reused so many times that it's like eating ur shit over and over and over again until it just comes out ur ass as the post taco bell special (might have went a bit to hard there but Idgaf)
That was the funniest comment I've seen a while, haha!! Made me gag. But thank you so much!!!! My pronouns are he/him btw :) I tried really hard to balance all my elements like the madness and the comedy and emotional scenes - I'm glad you think I did a good job!! And of course, I try and stay as clear as possible from cliches. But of course I'm not perfect so there might be some idk lmao Please keep an eye out for my future posts btw!! <3
This VN is now my new addction. I Love it, i just LOVE IT, DUDE! ITS SUCH A NEW AND GOOD INVENTION! I wanna know everything! The biology behind them, how the history became to be, how they got there, what's happening, what will happen, who will it be, what is wrong with the superiors, what are theyr plans. I JUST, I NEED TO KNOW!!! THIS VN IS AMAZING! IT HAS EVERYTHING TO ROPE ME HERE FOREVER! NOT ONLY THE LOVE INTERESTS, BUT HOW IT WORKS AND HOW IT WILL HAPPEN IN THE FUTURE!! I JUST, I LOVE THIS! I REALLY REALLY LOVE THIS! PLEASE KEEP GOING MY FRIEND! I Will stay here and wait for as long as necessary, i will keep here am by your side!
You are just so sweet!!! I appreciate your compliments so very much. Your enthusiasm towards my work inspires me!! I'm so grateful that you took the time to even read any of it!! Thank you for being such a wonderful fan of Kalight... I couldn't ask for a better fan!!! I love you guys!! Please keep an eye out for my posts, as I'm about to make one!! I would seriously appreciate it if you kept following my art. No pressure of course!! But you guys are the reason I still make it <3
Thank you!!! Being isolated and alone for many years of your life and being stuck in your thoughts for hours does that to you! Also being open-minded and questioning everything - that helps to generate crazy and ridiculous ideas!! Thank you for this comment <3
holy hell you do not need to apologise for being slow for updates! considering you're doing the art, writing, composition and programming by yourself, the rate that updates are coming out is mad. i've seen whole teams come out with smaller updates on far longer timescales!
for some semblence of actual review, this is pretty great! the art is better than most, the music is good enough that i'd listen to it by itself and i absolutely love the worldbuidling. keep going at even half the quality you have right now and you'll have a fvn that's significantly better than most on itch.
Thank you so much for your compliments!! Being responsible for pretty much everything in the entire visual novel was definitely a challenge - but for it to be really authentic, it has to all come from me! I work full time as well so all I did for months was just work, then go home and work on the game, get no sleep, then do it all over again lol.
I tried really hard with the art, and put a lot of effort into the soundtrack... I'm so incredibly happy that you enjoyed it! This comment really made my day and I wish you all the happiness in the world for making me feel like I'm worth something. You don't know how much this did for me. Thank you!!! <3 <3 <3
Oohhh, haha! Thank you for letting me know! I'm still not very good with this sort of stuff, so I appreciate the help! <3 And yes, please give it a shot! But no pressure! It's a bit strange :)
I finally managed to catch up… This is good. Very good.
The level of strangeness feels right in a way that’s difficult for me to put into words, but I can say that it doesn’t feel arbitrary. You’ve found a good balance between explaining things and presenting them as they are for the reader to interpret or remember for later.
I think that, from a technical/skill point of view, the recent days are done a bit better than the first ones, but the difference isn’t so large that it would be jarring.
If you’d like your sprite workflow to be more efficient, you could look into Layered Images. That would avoid having to export each possible combination individually. I’m not really clear on how they work, though, or if there are any reasons you might want to avoid using them.
This VN is not the first to make me feel uncomfortable, but has 100% made me feel the most uncomfortable of any VN to date! That's saying a lot considering the others had much more gore jump scares and general ickyness!
Please understand I don't mean any of this in a negative way, and I feel as though the author is expecting such reactions.
In this VN a compelling story has been created, and I'll fight through those queasy feelings to continue reading new chapters.
Thank you so much for your comment and your compliments!! I'm so very glad that it's made you uncomfortable! By constantly presenting my potential readers with uncomfortable and disturbing concepts and imagery, I aim to broaden their perspective and ability to understand and feel okay with things they otherwise wouldn't. It's kind of like presenting someone with their fears until they eventually become open or comfortable to whatever they once feared. There's no point making something if it doesn't help one grow in some way!
If you don't mind, what exactly made you feel uncomfortable in my visual novel? What made it the most uncomfortable visual novel you've read? I would love to know! And thank you again! <3 <3 <3
Specifics? Oh no! The exact follow up question I feared when I made my comment!
Well, here goes! Deep breath!
Spoilers
First the reader is presented with two possible outcomes, both are super bad for someone if not every one. With no quarter given to the “there must be some other way” train of thought the story has a kind of “if you’re expecting a happy ending you’re not paying attention” sorta vibe.
All the themes you warned of such as substance use, mental health issues, extreme trauma, suicidal/homicidal thoughts and the very idea of people that are afflicted by such holding the fate of every one else in their hands. (Mainly because that’s real life where I live.)
Next comes the idea of unending nose and ear bleeds! The tunnel, all the blood, vomit and such, I simply found text descriptions of these things to be more disturbing than VNs that rely on visual cues to portray this because my imagination does so much worse to me with descriptive words.
Lastly… Reuben! So much with this one alone! Innards! Licking said innards! The copious amount of times he said “and again” in the second bed time story! The first bedtime story! but mostly some of the views he expressed such as hostility towards an entire group of people despite many of those people must have been grown well after the events that he is resentful for. Also I feel specifically called out by a comment he made about docile people since that’s my natural disposition as a person.
Well that about wraps it up, and again I must emphasize that none of this is meant as criticism, with out such elements it would be difficult to write such a compelling story.
Ps. I like the way Neo is drawn and I hope to see more artwork of him beside the other characters. I know this might be difficult because the story is meant to be seen through his eyes so here is to me hoping for a mirror scene in the future!
Oh, I apologise if you didn't want me to ask such a question!! But I'm glad you've answered!
Hahaha, this is one of my favourite comments!! I'm so glad my visual novel's concepts have had the impact I intended!! And I must say, you're quite observant! As I said earlier, it's my mission to expose the reader to all of these dark and strange things in order to help desensitize them to such things, so I'm glad it's made you feel a little uncomfortable at times!
But in all honesty, all of the things you listed as disturbing... are actually very normal to me, hence why I asked what made you uncomfortable specifically! Heck, I didn't even know I was writing horror until someone pointed it out to me. But I appreciate the effort you went through to type that out, it's really helped open my eyes to what others think as disturbing!! I hope to keep exposing you to strange and different things, if you'd like! After all, normal is boring!
(And of course, I would love to draw Neo more! He's my fursona, so I've drawn him more times in my life than anything else! You will see more of him! <3 )
3) Launch Renpy, and Click on 'Android' in the actions category, underneath build distributions. Then install the SDK and create keys. Keep the keys you create safe.
4) Go back to the `Android` section, and click `Configure`, and follow the prompts.
This sets up your environment to build android versions, but there are some code changes needed for the full experience. Basically any graphical changes you've made, need to have a mobile variant declared. To do this, you copy the style, and add `variant "small"` or `variant "touch"`, depending on the context, to it.
Things that need to be changed:
-The textbox needs the new sprite. You can just remove the `phone/` part in the `style window`, under mobile variants.
-Choices menu needs to be changed. They currently go way to the right. Duplicate the choice screen, add
variant "touch"
Then you can replace the area parameter with
ysize 0.6
align (0.5, 0.5)
This gives a more scalable, and less hard coded variant for mobile.
-You'll probably want to add a 'Hide' button for mobile users, as they can't middle mouse button. Adding this code to `screen quick_menu` will add it: `textbutton _("Hide") action HideInterface()`
I don't know if there's any other screens that don't work on mobile, but these are the main ones.
After this, you can build the android version. You'll want to build a universal apk, not the playstore version. It'll take a while, but afterwards, you'll have an apk. You can install this on your phone to test, or with an android emulator.
Edit: Sorry for the wall of text lol. Let me know if you need any more help, or if I was unclear with something.
Thank you so much for your comment and helpful instructions!! I will try my best to create an android port right after I release my new update in a couple days!! Thank you for the help! I apologise that I haven't made one yet - because I'm new to android ports, I'm a bit scared to even attempt... but with your instructions, I'll give it a go and see what happens!! Thank you so much! I appreciate the effort you have gone through to help me out <3
I’ve been absolutely loving this vn so far. Everything you’ve built feels so intentional from the world, the characters, the music, and just the overall atmosphere in general. And I like how the story has a dark ambience to it while still having uplifting and likable characters.
The world building has been awesome so far. I really like how much effort you’ve put into creating depth to the culture of the Black Colony—with the artifacts, the bedtime stories, and just everything. The anatomy and foods of this world are also really fascinating. I love how you're not afraid to design the world in a way that may seem strange or unorthodox. It creates this great sense of mystery where, as the reader, I’m always curious what I’ll discover next.
I feel like Neo, specifically, has been a really compelling character and protagonist. He always seems to be considering people's feelings about things, making sure they’re ok, and making sure to not implicate them into things they're not comfortable with. I really like how caring and perceptive he is towards the people around him—especially when they’re feeling down. It warmed my heart to see how much of an effort Neo made to get Reuben to open up (and include him in the friend group) rather than letting him drift off into loneliness and isolation. It’s so easy to fall into the trap of self-isolation, and I’ve faced it in my life quite a bit in my own life. So, I really admire how much he recognizes the importance of reaching out to people when they need it.
This VN has been such an amazing read so far. Thank you SO MUCH for making this!!!
Also wondering, is the title "Season May" symbolic of something? I’m just curious.
Thank you Sydney for reading my visual novel!! I really, really appreciate the positive feedback and wonderful compliments! Absolutely everything is intentional, and I work very hard to create all the different aspects that make up Season May!
Yes!! I very much prefer the strange and unorthodox - and I've tried to make the world as alien as possible, because normal is boring!! And while it's a lot harder to design worlds and their logic from scratch, it's much more rewarding. As a writer, it's hard not to lean back into things that you already know. So, as I made Season May into a VN, I made sure to never hold back, and to design the world and its characters however I want. After all, in this story, I am God! Why wouldn't I? :)
There's a lot more to Neo than what I've written so far!! While he seems very kind and observant, you'll get to know a bit more about him and his past in future updates! Please look forward to it!! I've always been a fan of multi-faceted protagonists, so anticipate some intrigue!
No, thank you for reading it!!! <3 I hope it has brought you happiness and manifested new memories into your brain. :3
(P.S. It is symbolic of something, but you'll have to find out!!)
Thank you so much for reading my visual novel!! I’ve put a LOT of work into it, and I’m happy you’ve enjoyed it!! Yes, my apologies - my grammar may not be amazing at times, I just tend to write how I speak, if that makes sense!! It’s all very imperfect, just like me lol :)
Finally someone has mentioned the detonate button lmaooo, you’ll find out what it means in the future!! ❤️❤️
Honestly, that button was the first thing I tried and it really took me by surprise what you did there lol.
But don't worry too much about the grammar, just a handful of words at most that I thought could use some change, nothing major but overall I did like how you wrote and paced each scene so far.
Aaand just like that, you got yourself a rent free space in my mind, I'll definitely check it out when it's here!
Your game came out of nowhere for me, and I must admit the concept alone made me curious and I played it and I definitely enjoyed how you've built your story
Thank you so much for deciding to read my visual novel!! And thank you for the compliment! There’s much more to come, so I hope you find the multitude of concepts in my future updates satisfying as well!! ❤️❤️
hehehe, thank you! I’ve reworked all the sprites and changed colours and shiz. It’ll all be in the next update I’m working on right now!! Though I’m just about to update the existing one today, sprites only, so it’s not misleading lol
Naww, thanks man. I just released a patch with the updated sprites, but the update should be out soon! And yes, it is insane!!!!! Thank you for being interested in my stuff ❤️
Not gonna lie, I kinda liked Neo's original color scheme better. Though I respect the artistic choice to change it to red. Fits the character, seeing as red-colored blood is considered an anomaly and all.
Aww, thank you!! Yeah, his colour scheme has changed throughout the years, here’s a list in chronological order for your convenience!
Rainbow
Teal and purple
Pink and blue
Grey
Dark green and black
Blotched rainbow
Dark blue and yellow
Teal and black
Red
The only reason I have decided to change his fur colour to red is because… I’ve changed. Neo is my fursona and I’m not the same as I used to be. Red and black are colours that I feel represent who I am now, and I also like red because it’s a bit more… masculine for him. Imo tho ❤️❤️
And yes, I also think it fits more with the aesthetic I’m going for!!
sorry for being so tardy. Anyway, You've done it again, I'm absolutely blown away by everything you've wrote and THE MUSIC, oh the music is always top notch, I'll be waiting for day 4 AFTER the Christmas vacation's are over, so Kideshi I ask of you not to be so hard on yourself and get a nice winter vacation.
[SPOILERS AHEAD] So first of all, I love the cooking tutorial with seth giving us a Kalightian Culinary class instead of the usual Biology one, which I still adore. I hope we'll have more time to cook and eat whatever Seth and Neo made, especially if Seth will bend over every time to pick up a utensil~ hopefully though, next time we won't have to bleed by thinking of negative memory to get the sizzling started.
Oh my, the Endomycha scene, at least we got some new info about Seth's past and ahem kink cough* and by the way, I'm not sure if it was intentional or not but is the "sexy color gray" supposed to be a reference to 50 shades of gray? Either way *Vomits*
Hope you like the magazine I found laying on the ground of the treasure room. (That Demented shark on the ceiling gave me a such a scare that I stumbled down and found myself face to face on this very explicit magazine.)
Returning to the Endomycha scene, man oh man, The Jaw Divers are gonna have additional trauma on top of what they had plus I didn't expect that being horny woudld save us, but I ain't complaining especially with the view that I got~ *Whistle* I gotta give it to ya, those were some nice assets and rods that you've shown us, alas, if I could only touch them instead of just our own... nontheless, thanks for the show.
Now, talking about the music... "Touch Me Lullaby" is such a song that I could describe such as a simple "laying in bed and listening to the rain outside hitting the glass accompanied by a broken Vinyl playing in the background" but I must interpret what I saw or felt during that lullaby. It starts with a nice melody accompanied by a sound in the background that could be paragonized as the sound of the rain, soon after if I listen intently, I think I hear someone humming, now I'm envisioning 2 people that may be the same but not quite. The sound of the rain now is accompanied by a rumbling of a machine, the 2 of them are inside the car and as the young one sits in the back humming that song, the car moves faster and faster until it goes off from a bridge or a cliff and suddenly the melody becomes dull, like someone was drowning it, submerged into the water and it's not constant, It's like having brief flashes of memories of what happened before it all crashed down, repeating that nice lullaby on loop. Sorry if I'm killing the mood like Reub'o but I just hope you've healed from whatever happened in year 12.
From what you've written anger seemed to be the solution against being depressed, and it might be a good one at the start but anger usually subsides after a short period of time, therefore Lust was the next solution which was more constant as we have more stuff to be horny instead of being angry at one thing for so long, yet I can't help that by the last part you've written, Companionship was the best thing someone like Neo could've ever got, especially since it's people who understand him, It's nice, I've quite teared up at that point. As always great job, You've created yourself a beautiful cult. I'll be waiting patiently for day 4 and some explanations about the farm in which Seth was in, hopefully withouth encountering Siro, if we'll encounter him I'll personally give him a sucker punch for whatever he did to Seth.
P.S I'm gonna ruin the mood again, sorry. Again I noticed a misspelling before the treasure room and after the Endomycha scene. You wrote at the end "Roof aboce" I think you may have intended to write "Roof above". It's really a minor error, not even worth noticing, so don't be hard on yourself
Okay first of all, I LOVE THAT MAGAZINE COVER HAHAHAHA That's one of my favourite things evveeerrrrr!!! Thank you so much for putting time and effort in to make that!! I'm sorry I didn't reply earlier, I didn't get the notification at all! And please don't feel pressured to make things for me, just the fact that you read my visual novel is enough!! But I love your fanart and stuff so much, it makes me very happy to know I have real fans like you!!! :3
Yes, I put a lot of effort into the music - especially the little cutscene I did there! It took so long to get it timed just right - but I'm so happy you appreciate it! I even use the music player myself now when I'm coding!
{SPOILERS AHEAD] Hehe, I enjoyed the cooking part! I just thought something nice and calming was appropriate before the storm that was the endomycha. HAHA, I did think about 50 shades actually in that joke. But I haven't watched it cause I'm gay.
HAHAHA, I see you've looked into the files to find that I called it a demented shark lol. It's so fuckin' gross but that's what aesthetic the Black Colony is going for! Horror and intimidation!!
Yessss... I'm still trying to get better at drawing, but I very much enjoyed drawing gay furry p***! I think the one of Lucifer was probably my best!! That whole thing with the endomycha was kind of a reflection of myself and how during my darkest times, my um, primal instincts have always been there to save me. Most of the time, anyway. And I think it's something people don't talk about enough considering it's completely normal and literally the main thing we're put on the planet to do/feel.
Thank you for that Touch Me Lullaby scene... that was really powerful, and very sad. I'm sorry that the stuff I've made has caused you to create such sad imagery. But you've done such an amazing job at capturing the essence of the song and its sadness... the lullaby itself is only a small snippet on loop of the original song, but... I felt it necessary to just keep it on a constant loop to ensure the reader feels uneasy and disoriented. To me, the song symbolises the last thing you hear before death - which is why I gave the option for you to choose to die while the song fades out and the game exits. I've been in that place myself so many times, so it's cathartic to be able to experience it in game.
Yes, Siro can go fuck himself. Don't worry we'll get to him and The Farm eventually!! Unfortunately, sometimes, when some Kalightians are grown, they come out as assholes who need to be put back in the ground :) And thanks for the spelling error check!! I knew I would forget something!!
Again, thank you so much Bon! I'm sorry for the long message, but I had to reply to your entire comment! I look forward to them very much. But no pressure!! I'm currently working on the next update right now, and let me tell you, things are intense!! There's drama, tense situations, violence, crime and even more sexual stuff to come!! It's honestly one of the most jam-packed updates ever - and I've reworked every sprite! Please look forward to it!! Thank you so much again <3 <3 <3
❤️🖤💙 Oh shucks (⁄ ⁄•⁄ω⁄•⁄ ⁄) It's the least I could offer since reading your stuff actually helps me too, especially since it's something that a person who was close to death multiple times and the stuff you write it's not all "Doom and Gloom" so it really helps. Shame my primal instincts are basically the same as B-man Philocision, meaning almost inexistent BUT not all is lost, I just gotta have confidence in myself (I've got to be more fierce if I wanna have a chance with the definition of "Potential boyfriend" of Reuben).
I'm also trying to get better at drawing, I hope that it won't disturb you if I use some of your sprites to get some of the fanarts done. I'll get better at it and soon maybe I'll do something decent.
For now though, ENJOY THE CHRISTMAS! If I get any coal from santa I'll stash them until we see Siro so that I can throw them at him. I'll be waiting, patiently and exitedly, for the next update.
TAKE CARE! AND HAPPY HOLIDAYS °˖✧◝(⁰▿⁰)◜✧˖° *Virtual hugs*
Naww, your drawings are awesome!! The one you did of Neo with the Sun Dagger was actually amazing!! To the point where I wanted to draw in that style too! The muzzle and the eyes were everything!! So don’t doubt yourself please!! It’s one of my favourite things!!
And of course you can use my sprites for fan art, I don’t mind! It’s just really flattering that someone even wants to make fan art of my work. :)
It’s okay! It’s hard to be confident when you feel like you’re not good enough… I know what that feels like all too well. But the more you try, the more likely you’ll succeed! Even if you fail at any of your endeavours, like I did for a very very long time, it’s never really a failure because you’re getting better each time! That’s what kept me at it, even when I just wanted to quit because it seemed like I could never get better.
And hey, it’s okay if you’re not comfortable with those instincts. It took me a very long time to be okay with it, you just have to embrace the innate joy in it and throw away the stigma!
You have a wonderful Christmas too, my wonderful fan!! And thank you for engaging in my work as always. I am forever grateful!! (P.S. Don’t throw your coal at poor Siro!! Sharpen it, infuse it with iliocide and kill him instead. Gotta show mercy!!)
Holy...I am...still kinda recovering from the emotional whiplash here.
I don't wanna say too much cuz I don't wanna spoil things for others or rehash stuff I've already said in previous comments but hoo...
...Good stuff. Fucked up in more ways than one. But still good! Hope whatever you're going through right now isn't TOO horrible/serious. The only advice I can give is not to stress too much about getting updates out every month. I, for one, am totally enraptured with this story and while I'm eager to see more I'm also willing to wait as long as it takes.
As I hinted at in my little bit of fanfiction I wrote, I'm also going through a rough patch in my life, so I can sort of relate in a way? Probably nothing as serious as the trauma Neo and the gang have faced, but yeah. I'm constantly battling my own demons as well.
Hang in there! Like I said before you've got a big fan in me. Hope you're doing okay and looking forward to seeing more!
Thank you so much for your comment!! Yeah, this chapter was quite a roller coaster of emotions!! It was quite difficult to write due to how Neo’s feelings are a reflection of mine, and especially how horrifically dark it gets - but I’m so glad I wrote it. And thank you - although I would love to get out updates as soon as possible, I need to make sure I don’t overwork myself/stress myself out too much, which I tend to do regardless… but I’ll figure that out. Thank you for being such a big fan, and I hope the update was worth your while!! There’s a lot more to come ❤️❤️
So already the cooking tutorial I'm not going to give the details I had things that don't make you want to taste Seth and Neo's cooking it's even almost weird like a sort of panna gotta recipe but version of death but as my friend just said in the comment towards the bottom is true it was incredibly scary and sexy~~~ I don't think I'll see Seth Neo (Roy) Reuben B. MAN naked with their big package😂🤣
Thank you so much for reading!! Haha yes, that was a death version of a panna cotta. Very strange flavours in the Black Colony considering it’s all pretty much mud and ocean lolol
HAHAHAHA, I love that!! I had fun drawing their packages, as I’m a big fan of that specific area of the body :)
Well you really worked hard, I congratulate you, even the community definitely enjoyed DAY 3, honestly, but I don't think I'll see the naked characters hahah but good job.
Thank you so much for reading Season May!! I definitely worked real hard on this update, with the music, the sprites/drawings, all of it!! And I’m glad you appreciate it!! There will be more to come ❤️❤️❤️
Aww, thank you so much!! Lots of hard work put into this, even when I doubt myself. I'm just about to release the next update, so I hope you like it!! <3 <3 <3
I love it looking foward to see more of the boys the story and everything! I might have found the next boy's sprite in the files but i wont spoil him to others.
hahaha, I do have a couple of unfinished sprites in there!! They look much better now, and will be released in the next update, so please take a look!! And thank you for your comment. There’s a lot more to see!! ❤️❤️
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ok not sure what i'm supposed to feel but okay, it was an experience.
So, just to know, is it the end of the story ? Or do you plan to pursue it ? If so, well good luck on that ! You got something here, a worldbuilding and interesting premice.
Are you ok?
No😔
Welp base on the comment alone tell me it gonna be a blast but....... mostly really my mental health might not be able to handle what come to me if I may play/read it. But doesn't mean I won't be tackling it, just need the right time to get to it.
but hey if I tackle it today with my current health and I fell in the spiral pit of hell. I think kalemsight might be able to bring me back from the pit it self XD ( I'm sorry but it to hilarious not to mention it when I stumble upon it XD )
keep up the good work and always priorities your health if it getting worse. Have a nice long rest for this master piece I might tackled in the future💕
WAIT IS DIS HOW IT ENDS?! :000 IS THERE A BACKYSTORY TO LARRY AND THE OTHER OCS IN THE FIRST START?
aint now way not again 😭
Can you like, chill?
If they haven't posted anything regarding updates, don't go around spreading baseless rumors.
It's VERY rude and a disservice to the author.
oh, im sorry, i mainly made the comment because the creator deleted the socials originally meant to advertise the new VN, i was concerned and didnt know how to express it that time so i masked it in sarcasm. I didnt mean to make it come out this way, i sincerely apologize to you and Kideshi.
there’s a lot of other FVNs you can try
here, i listed them a lot of them on this docs
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1fYGZTAEEdhbJiszHOawTrdjU72Wu8kjgqEjH4haMA4E/edit#heading=h.suwlqupsso5q
Praying to the heavens above that you aint dead rn, cuz if you is. Then istg i will pull you out the firey pits of satan, i will personally drag you out of them lava rivers myself to finish this game lil bro. Demons will DIE, Lucifer himself will be MORTIFIED of the horrors i am about to unleash upon them. 🙏
I think… we dont have hope anymore…
Here lies the body of Kideshi, presumably born no sooner than 2005 and no later than 1990. As a humble fan of his work, I shall mourn the creator of the game, a game he can never finish. I think we can all agree that his work has touched all of our hearts, and could have touched the hearts of others. He was taken too soon, and now we may have been left on a cliffhanger. I hope death may guide him peacefully to the afterlife. And whoever has access to his hard drive, please, in honor of his memory, finish the work he can never finish; I think that only then he can have peace.
where are you getting this information
Based on the current evidence
Yeah but where
He is probably still alive but just moving on or too busy with his life or something. Or he will return with another game under different account in a few years like how he move on from Flatwood drop-out to create this game.
But yeah his work is great. 10/10. best furry vn.
prolly. but you know how people say “chat is dead” on discord if theres no one chatting or no activity? Well this is basically that but with an account, thats why i said the account name not his real name (because i dont know his real name) so allat is just a joke. But i am sorrowful as i really wanted to finish the game…
boo
omg your not dead…
HE HAS RISEN! WE MAY HAVE JUST SEEN A MIRACLE! 😭
(Love your work btw, take your time.)
Hey, man. The vn was amazing, i loved how you wrote each and every characters personality, i also loved how you named b man's cafe the semicolon cafe because the semicolon is a symbol of mental health and suicide awareness since he suffered from depression before. I cant wait for day 5! And also take your time, because quality takes time. But if you havnet already, can you make a social media account where you post updates about the game? I dont wanna sound paranoid, which i very much am, but its been three months and ive been very worried. I hope this doesnt put much pressure on you though, i just want to voice out my concern because im kinda alone and its rare for me to see an actual, good, Visual Novel that distracts me from that.
Hello kalemsight, the one who brought me back from the depths of Hell!!
Thank you so very much for your amazing compliments!!! And I'm so glad you noticed all the small little details I put into the visual novel!! Sometimes I'm not sure if anyone gets them - I wasn't even sure if anyone had pressed the "detonate" button until a few months ago lol
Naww... I totally get you. I'm going through a lot of stuff too, and I'm always alone... hence why I haven't updated the visual novel in a few months... I've been trying to stay away from it and block it out of my mind because it hurts to think about... but uh, I'm about to make a post explaining everything!! So please stay tuned for that!! And thank you for even showing a tiny bit of concern for me and my art. I will forever appreciate your enthusiasm and your worry for me. I will never forget it!! <3 <3 <3
But again, stay tuned for that post!!!
Aww, I'm so glad I made you feel appreciated! And I don't know if this was because of the episode, but seeing that you replied to this and my last comment actually made me jump in glee, hahaha. But, anyways, if it hurts too much to think about, you could always take a hiatus until you feel better. But if it persists for too long, you could consider giving the project to someone else to finish. Because you should always prioritize your mental health over a game. These are one of the times where you don't push yourself too hard since it always makes you worse rather than better. So what I'm trying to say is, take your time, but if there isn't enough time, you could always give that time to someone else. <3
Naww, i’m so glad!! I just submitted a post about it just now!! I’m going to be moving on to another exciting project! But i will be keeping many things from Season May. Not all of it will be lost! My characters and my stories will always stay with me… and yes, that is true! Giving the story to someone else could be a wonderful idea, and i would feel awful just giving up on it. But just like the reason i make everything on my own, i could never give my characters or stories over to someone else… it would truly be like ripping my heart out!! i’ve spent so much time alone and with only my characters to keep me alive… i could never part with them or give them to someone. they’re like my children, if you know what i mean. essential parts of my suffering, and an essential part of my identity… but as i said, when i move on to another project, all will not be forgotten… ❤️❤️
and thank you for the comment, i appreciate it!! ❤️
Aww man, does that mean it'll get discontinued? I really wanted to see the ending of it, but that's alright, i understand, and i get what you mean. Just as long as you feel that it's the right decision, then it's the right decision. Also, I can't wait to see or possibly play your other projects in the future. I can tell by your experiences you can make a great angst story, hahaha. 🫶Oh and no problem!
I can't found the playlist 😭😭😭😭
I created my account just to comment here. I loved this game so much😭😭 it's so bad that finished, I really hope that you upload more times in future (I so sad to not know your work before because I would love to know you) . I loved your work please don't stop, I would love if I could interact with you because you apper to be a lovely person and this is story is making me anxious because I want to know more about. Good work (sorry if is difficult to read, my English isn't very good)
Thank you LionLost!!! You are so lovely!! I'm sorry for the late reply. I so very much appreciate you making an account to comment - sometimes I forget that people play the game and don't comment, so I kind of anticipate the comments mostly. I'm just about to make a post, so please stay tuned for that!! And I'm so flattered that you think I'm a good person - I try, haha! <3 <3 <3
And don't worry, your English is just fine to me ;)
You're alive !! 😭😭😭 thanks for everything, I'm glad that you think my English is fine, I really try... but I'd like to know, I didn't find the Spotify's playlist ;-; could send the link??? I really want to listen the songs that helped you create this incredible world.
Thanks for reply <3 <3 <3 the time is just fine, the important is that try to
Oh, it's not often i find games that hit.. That close to the heart. I have too much emotions that i can't convey in comments, but i'd really wish to.
It feels painful to relate on so much levels with some of the characters.
Please feel free to convey said emotions, I'd love to hear them! Sorry I'm a bit late, haha. And yes - the characters are all very uh... troubled. Not in a stereotypical trauma-dump way, but a uh... sophisticated way. I think. Hope. Lol <3 And I'm so glad it hit close to your heart, cause I ripped out mine and put it in this game lol <3
holy fucking shit i came here expecting next from nothin and all of a sudden i'm fuckin blasted with some of the most well written scenes (especially the depressive ones) that i've ever seen!!
it easily became my favorite vn lmao
great job man, i fucking adore your style and i CAN'T wait to see the next update!
Thank you gakomi!!!! That is such high praise!! I'm so humbled by your compliment!! I'm so happy you enjoyed my art. I worked so hard on it, and it makes me smile knowing that it's one of your faves!!! <3 <3
Nawww, thank you!! My style is weeiiiirrrrdddd
When will you make more of the story i dont want it so end
Thank you for reading my visual novel!! I'm going to make a post very very soon, so please stay tuned for that!!! <3
When I was looking for a novel to play, I came across this game, and the first thing that surprised and attracted me was the concept of the main character: “A fox who bleeds from his ears and nose.” I was very attracted to this, and without thinking twice, I downloaded it. Then I passed it, and I was surprised that it was horror because I didn’t look at the tags initially and didn’t know that it was psychological horror, not just horror. The scene in the cave left an indelible mark on me. I then walked for several more days and had that same scene in my head. The OST is amazing. I'm not listening to it. I'm really looking forward to the next days. The story of Neo and Seth is very interesting. The author needs more patience and strength. I really want to plunge into this world again!
Thank you so, so much for taking the time to read my visual novel!!! I'm so sorry if the horror aspects caught you off guard - and I hope it didn't leave a negative impact on you!! But hey... I'm glad you got a few memories out of it! That scene in the cave was extremely important to me - and one that I am very proud of writing. It's a very familiar scene in my real life, and I'm glad I was able to put it in this visual novel and show my readers what mental health can look like!! <3 <3
And thank you for the compliment!! I worked so incredibly hard on the OST... so so many hours lmao <3
Thank you for the work done on the game, you shouldn’t regret that it turned out great, it’s worth saying that the horror element was really scary, you perfectly prepared the player for this moment with music and conversations with the characters, although I’m not a connoisseur of visual novels (after all, I’ve only played a few novels) As for me, you approached something like a doki-doki literary club. I also really want to note that the scene in the cave is, for me, one of the best scenes in the game, probably because of the turning point that occurs at this time.Now, you may not believe me, but I considered this moment and thought that at the time of developing this scene you were not going through the best moments in your life (or it’s just a bias towards the way people look with various psychological problems)
Not going to lie, I never comment on any vn I play (I play a lot) but this one is honestly one of the most enthralling stories I've read in a long time and I absolutely love the art! I binged the entire thing and now I'm eager for the next update! Amazing work! (P.S Android build worked perfectly I believe)
Thank you so much!!! I wasn't sure if the android version worked or not, so I'm glad it did! I can't believe I even figured it out lol. And thank you for the comment!!! I appreciate it more than you know!! <3 <3
AHHHHH I'M SO LATE, AGAIN!
but my usual monthly comment after an update has arrived!
First of all, I love all the changes you did even if minimal, it's really is a pain in the ass if you've already got so many sprites to edit and I assure you we'll be happy even if for you it doesn't look quite right since after all you as their creator will see details that most of us won't notice.
Second, I'm astonished with all the backgrounds that you made and 13 music tracks! You really made a lot of work for this update.
[SPOILERS]
Now for the story: You almost made me had a heart attack, heck that disappearing act that Reuben did and the upcoming alphas that might put a stop to all Neo did, almost made me think we'd lose him.
I was surprised that Neo took out an omega like Darhunt in such a short time and (love the sun dagger design) thanks for another 101 of the Kalight body functions 'cause if I didn't know that I'd though Darhunt was a goner.
Is Neo secretly a past Alpha or Omega or something much more endearing?
More to the 101 biology of the Kalightians about their organs, much appreciated but I do have a question, Is their blood some kind of acid? that also tasted good or bad depending on the person and maybe what they eat.
MmmGHhhMm Reuben's scene...
I'm with Neo with this one, it's a bit soon but it's not like we ate, took or drank what was in front of us, they were just helping a buddy blacking a whole colony through a helping hand.
I'm so glad Neo was able to reason with Reuben 'cause if he didn't come with the Jaw Divers I'd manually put an option to stay with Reub and make the game end as one of the endings, glad that wasn't the case.
Ahh the finally a background that isn't a shade of gray, Purple Flesh Colony here we are!
Shame we didn't spend as much time in it like we did in the Black Colony, I really liked the design of the city and it's not as blinding as the White Colony, fortunately B man's bar is just the perfect place to shield my eyes from being blind. Now I wanna know how popular B man's bar is since his blood is so tasteful and the ambience is so moody in such a good way that it'd be like a chill café. Love our interaction with "Fanboy" Darhunt (Only for S'Ferro) and the little bed time story Seth told us.
Here you unlocked a part of DancingSeth.png
I'm not sure what to expect in the next updates since now they have a lot of open options. I won't bother you with the misspellings since there's almost none... depending if you're using American English over Britannic English.
Love from Bon <3 <3 <3
(I'll try to finish the "dancingseth.png" for next update and maybe add something more mmm, Until Next Time!)
Hello, my wonderful friend Bon!!! I'm so sorry I haven't replied... I've been going through a lot as usual... and I'll explain all in a post very soon. But thank you so, so much for your wonderful compliments and comments that I keep getting. Your comments are always one of my favourites to recieve!!!
Their blood is uh, kind of like an acid I guess! But moreso just blood! Or rather a more sophisticated type of blood that's a bit more efficient than ours.
HAHAHA!! Yes, that Reuben scene was honestly really hard to write. Not only because it's so sad... but because I've clearly gone through the same thing. Sitting there, not wanting anything, thinking your life is worthless and better off being over... only for you to get up and live another day, for no reason at all. Just the will to live is enough, without reason. It's quite a powerful scene - I genuinely think it's one of the best ones I've written as most of the time when a character is sad, there'll be a solution - or some sort of quote for the protagonist to lift them up. But here... it's just nothing. And I feel like that's more realistic...
Thank you so so much for the dancing Seth!!! That made my day when I saw it... and thank you so much for all the fan art and little gifts along the way. Honestly, it's what got me through a lot of the updates. I promise my work isn't finished (unless something happens to me out of my control) - and I sincerely hope to keep you as a loving fan.
I'm just about to make a post about a few things... please give it your attention! Of course, you've already done so much for me - I don't expect you to do any more. I honestly love you guys so much, especially you Bon!! <3 <3 <3
WHY IS NOBODY TALKING ABT THE OST!? Like HELLO?! "Touch me lullaby" is so good!?!? (listening to it on repeat rn this game is so good :3)
Hehehehe, thank you!!! I worked so hard on the soundtrack - I'm so happy you enjoyed it!! "Touch Me Lullaby" is a distorted version of a song I made back in Year 12 when I was going through a lot of mental issues. It's probably the saddest song I've ever written, and I thought putting it right before the possible suicide scene would make a lot of sense!! :3
Loved the vn and the android thing worked btw!
My favorite Visual novel in 2024
Nawww, you guys are just so sweet!!! Thank you so much!!!
How the hell is this vn so good!?
Thank you so much my friend!!! <3 <3
You know the devs are cooking when the game hasn't even started yet and you get to troll the system by pressing the third choice
"maybe"
HAHAHA, I used that for Flatwood Drop-Outs (my first VN) and I had to keep it in. I always loved the idea of answering with "maybe" cause why tf not you know XP
😳 Bulge...
BIG FAT FLOPPING FLACCID COCKS! 🤯
🤤 Bulge...
Lol, but in all seriousness 👀
This has quickly become a feel good novel for me 😊 I find myself smiling, and even laughing, with every update. The world is so fascinating and fun to learn about, and while such intricate details would usually make it feel messy, xour style of writing, or perhaps simply the overall delivery of the story, doesn't make it feel strenuous or confusing to read 😌
Xou're doing a great job, btw 🙂 I know, better than most, the struggles of being overly critical on one's self, and while I haven't yet found a better solution other than spending time outside my head, and perhaps receiving encouragement from others, sometimes xou just gotta keep soldiering through! 😋 There are people who love what xou're doing, so just keep doing it! 😉
Thank you so much Phamyne!! I sincerely appreciate your wonderful compliments!! I tried really hard to balance what to explain to the reader and what not to explain - I hope I did an okay job lol!! One piece of advice I would recommend would be to remind yourself of reality and what really matters - a bird's eye view, perhaps. Just know that you're one little spec on the planet with billions of other little specs bustling around - no matter what you do or what you think, the only opinion that matters is yours! And nothing anyone does will have an eternal impact, so don't worry!! you're perfect the way you are <3
Please keep an eye out for future posts, btw!! <3
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If i could rate 5 stars I would but sadly I can't (sad Android user noises) this has really got me invested, you my good person (idk wtf ur pronouns r) have mad the perfect mix of drama randomness and comedy ( people say that random does not equal funny but with this it does) I think that this is one of the most original ideas for an fvn I've seen in a while
P.s. thx for not recycling the good old waking up from a nightmare at the start of the vn that most fvn's have already reused so many times that it's like eating ur shit over and over and over again until it just comes out ur ass as the post taco bell special (might have went a bit to hard there but Idgaf)
That was the funniest comment I've seen a while, haha!! Made me gag. But thank you so much!!!! My pronouns are he/him btw :)
I tried really hard to balance all my elements like the madness and the comedy and emotional scenes - I'm glad you think I did a good job!! And of course, I try and stay as clear as possible from cliches. But of course I'm not perfect so there might be some idk lmao
Please keep an eye out for my future posts btw!! <3
This VN is now my new addction. I Love it, i just LOVE IT, DUDE! ITS SUCH A NEW AND GOOD INVENTION! I wanna know everything! The biology behind them, how the history became to be, how they got there, what's happening, what will happen, who will it be, what is wrong with the superiors, what are theyr plans. I JUST, I NEED TO KNOW!!! THIS VN IS AMAZING! IT HAS EVERYTHING TO ROPE ME HERE FOREVER! NOT ONLY THE LOVE INTERESTS, BUT HOW IT WORKS AND HOW IT WILL HAPPEN IN THE FUTURE!! I JUST, I LOVE THIS! I REALLY REALLY LOVE THIS! PLEASE KEEP GOING MY FRIEND! I Will stay here and wait for as long as necessary, i will keep here am by your side!
You are just so sweet!!! I appreciate your compliments so very much. Your enthusiasm towards my work inspires me!! I'm so grateful that you took the time to even read any of it!! Thank you for being such a wonderful fan of Kalight... I couldn't ask for a better fan!!! I love you guys!! Please keep an eye out for my posts, as I'm about to make one!! I would seriously appreciate it if you kept following my art. No pressure of course!! But you guys are the reason I still make it <3
I'm still waiting!!! <3 I really wanna know what will happen
I do have to give you props for an original story. It's very strange, I have no idea how you brain thought of something like this.
Thank you!!! Being isolated and alone for many years of your life and being stuck in your thoughts for hours does that to you! Also being open-minded and questioning everything - that helps to generate crazy and ridiculous ideas!! Thank you for this comment <3
holy hell you do not need to apologise for being slow for updates! considering you're doing the art, writing, composition and programming by yourself, the rate that updates are coming out is mad. i've seen whole teams come out with smaller updates on far longer timescales!
for some semblence of actual review, this is pretty great! the art is better than most, the music is good enough that i'd listen to it by itself and i absolutely love the worldbuidling. keep going at even half the quality you have right now and you'll have a fvn that's significantly better than most on itch.
Thank you so much for your compliments!! Being responsible for pretty much everything in the entire visual novel was definitely a challenge - but for it to be really authentic, it has to all come from me! I work full time as well so all I did for months was just work, then go home and work on the game, get no sleep, then do it all over again lol.
I tried really hard with the art, and put a lot of effort into the soundtrack... I'm so incredibly happy that you enjoyed it! This comment really made my day and I wish you all the happiness in the world for making me feel like I'm worth something. You don't know how much this did for me. Thank you!!! <3 <3 <3
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-pcversion is playable natively on Linux too (since it has the.shlauncher), but it currently has to be extracted manually there.If you also select Linux for it like so, it’ll be installable using the itch.io app (which makes that a lot easier on touchscreen devices):
In any case, at first glance this looks interesting, so I’ll try to give it a read soon.
Oohhh, haha! Thank you for letting me know! I'm still not very good with this sort of stuff, so I appreciate the help! <3
And yes, please give it a shot! But no pressure! It's a bit strange :)
I finally managed to catch up… This is good. Very good.
The level of strangeness feels right in a way that’s difficult for me to put into words, but I can say that it doesn’t feel arbitrary. You’ve found a good balance between explaining things and presenting them as they are for the reader to interpret or remember for later.
I think that, from a technical/skill point of view, the recent days are done a bit better than the first ones, but the difference isn’t so large that it would be jarring.
If you’d like your sprite workflow to be more efficient, you could look into Layered Images. That would avoid having to export each possible combination individually. I’m not really clear on how they work, though, or if there are any reasons you might want to avoid using them.
This VN is not the first to make me feel uncomfortable, but has 100% made me feel the most uncomfortable of any VN to date! That's saying a lot considering the others had much more gore jump scares and general ickyness!
Please understand I don't mean any of this in a negative way, and I feel as though the author is expecting such reactions.
In this VN a compelling story has been created, and I'll fight through those queasy feelings to continue reading new chapters.
Thank you for sharing your works Kideshi.
Thank you so much for your comment and your compliments!! I'm so very glad that it's made you uncomfortable! By constantly presenting my potential readers with uncomfortable and disturbing concepts and imagery, I aim to broaden their perspective and ability to understand and feel okay with things they otherwise wouldn't. It's kind of like presenting someone with their fears until they eventually become open or comfortable to whatever they once feared. There's no point making something if it doesn't help one grow in some way!
If you don't mind, what exactly made you feel uncomfortable in my visual novel? What made it the most uncomfortable visual novel you've read? I would love to know!
And thank you again! <3 <3 <3
Specifics? Oh no! The exact follow up question I feared when I made my comment!
Well, here goes! Deep breath!
Spoilers
First the reader is presented with two possible outcomes, both are super bad for someone if not every one. With no quarter given to the “there must be some other way” train of thought the story has a kind of “if you’re expecting a happy ending you’re not paying attention” sorta vibe.
All the themes you warned of such as substance use, mental health issues, extreme trauma, suicidal/homicidal thoughts and the very idea of people that are afflicted by such holding the fate of every one else in their hands. (Mainly because that’s real life where I live.)
Next comes the idea of unending nose and ear bleeds! The tunnel, all the blood, vomit and such, I simply found text descriptions of these things to be more disturbing than VNs that rely on visual cues to portray this because my imagination does so much worse to me with descriptive words.
Lastly… Reuben! So much with this one alone! Innards! Licking said innards! The copious amount of times he said “and again” in the second bed time story! The first bedtime story! but mostly some of the views he expressed such as hostility towards an entire group of people despite many of those people must have been grown well after the events that he is resentful for. Also I feel specifically called out by a comment he made about docile people since that’s my natural disposition as a person.
Well that about wraps it up, and again I must emphasize that none of this is meant as criticism, with out such elements it would be difficult to write such a compelling story.
Ps. I like the way Neo is drawn and I hope to see more artwork of him beside the other characters. I know this might be difficult because the story is meant to be seen through his eyes so here is to me hoping for a mirror scene in the future!
Oh, I apologise if you didn't want me to ask such a question!! But I'm glad you've answered!
Hahaha, this is one of my favourite comments!! I'm so glad my visual novel's concepts have had the impact I intended!! And I must say, you're quite observant!
As I said earlier, it's my mission to expose the reader to all of these dark and strange things in order to help desensitize them to such things, so I'm glad it's made you feel a little uncomfortable at times!
But in all honesty, all of the things you listed as disturbing... are actually very normal to me, hence why I asked what made you uncomfortable specifically! Heck, I didn't even know I was writing horror until someone pointed it out to me. But I appreciate the effort you went through to type that out, it's really helped open my eyes to what others think as disturbing!! I hope to keep exposing you to strange and different things, if you'd like! After all, normal is boring!
(And of course, I would love to draw Neo more! He's my fursona, so I've drawn him more times in my life than anything else! You will see more of him! <3 )
No need to apologize, that was said in jest!
I'm looking forward to reading more, and good luck with everything!
Hey, If you still need help with making an android version, here's the main steps you'd need to follow:
1) Download RAPT from renpy's website for the renpy version you use, in the public release you used 7.4.9, so the link is: https://www.renpy.org/dl/7.4.9/renpy-7.4.9-rapt.zip
2) Download version 8 of the Adoptium JDK: https://adoptium.net/en-GB/temurin/archive/?version=8
3) Launch Renpy, and Click on 'Android' in the actions category, underneath build distributions. Then install the SDK and create keys. Keep the keys you create safe.
4) Go back to the `Android` section, and click `Configure`, and follow the prompts.
This sets up your environment to build android versions, but there are some code changes needed for the full experience. Basically any graphical changes you've made, need to have a mobile variant declared. To do this, you copy the style, and add `variant "small"` or `variant "touch"`, depending on the context, to it.
Things that need to be changed:
-The textbox needs the new sprite. You can just remove the `phone/` part in the `style window`, under mobile variants.
-Choices menu needs to be changed. They currently go way to the right. Duplicate the choice screen, add
Then you can replace the area parameter with
This gives a more scalable, and less hard coded variant for mobile.
-You'll probably want to add a 'Hide' button for mobile users, as they can't middle mouse button. Adding this code to `screen quick_menu` will add it:
`textbutton _("Hide") action HideInterface()`
I don't know if there's any other screens that don't work on mobile, but these are the main ones.
After this, you can build the android version. You'll want to build a universal apk, not the playstore version. It'll take a while, but afterwards, you'll have an apk. You can install this on your phone to test, or with an android emulator.
Edit: Sorry for the wall of text lol. Let me know if you need any more help, or if I was unclear with something.
Thank you so much for your comment and helpful instructions!! I will try my best to create an android port right after I release my new update in a couple days!! Thank you for the help! I apologise that I haven't made one yet - because I'm new to android ports, I'm a bit scared to even attempt... but with your instructions, I'll give it a go and see what happens!! Thank you so much! I appreciate the effort you have gone through to help me out <3
Will there be an Android version?
I would love to make one, but I’m not really sure how it all works!! My apologies! It is on my to-do list, though - if I can figure it out lol ❤️
Its ok take your time with it. Quality over quantity
Mean while, i still hava to catch up to the lates update 😅
The game works on JoiPlay if you want to play it on Android. At least it did for me.
I’ve been absolutely loving this vn so far. Everything you’ve built feels so intentional from the world, the characters, the music, and just the overall atmosphere in general. And I like how the story has a dark ambience to it while still having uplifting and likable characters.
The world building has been awesome so far. I really like how much effort you’ve put into creating depth to the culture of the Black Colony—with the artifacts, the bedtime stories, and just everything. The anatomy and foods of this world are also really fascinating. I love how you're not afraid to design the world in a way that may seem strange or unorthodox. It creates this great sense of mystery where, as the reader, I’m always curious what I’ll discover next.
I feel like Neo, specifically, has been a really compelling character and protagonist. He always seems to be considering people's feelings about things, making sure they’re ok, and making sure to not implicate them into things they're not comfortable with. I really like how caring and perceptive he is towards the people around him—especially when they’re feeling down. It warmed my heart to see how much of an effort Neo made to get Reuben to open up (and include him in the friend group) rather than letting him drift off into loneliness and isolation. It’s so easy to fall into the trap of self-isolation, and I’ve faced it in my life quite a bit in my own life. So, I really admire how much he recognizes the importance of reaching out to people when they need it.
This VN has been such an amazing read so far. Thank you SO MUCH for making this!!!
Also wondering, is the title "Season May" symbolic of something? I’m just curious.
Thank you Sydney for reading my visual novel!! I really, really appreciate the positive feedback and wonderful compliments! Absolutely everything is intentional, and I work very hard to create all the different aspects that make up Season May!
Yes!! I very much prefer the strange and unorthodox - and I've tried to make the world as alien as possible, because normal is boring!! And while it's a lot harder to design worlds and their logic from scratch, it's much more rewarding. As a writer, it's hard not to lean back into things that you already know. So, as I made Season May into a VN, I made sure to never hold back, and to design the world and its characters however I want. After all, in this story, I am God! Why wouldn't I? :)
There's a lot more to Neo than what I've written so far!! While he seems very kind and observant, you'll get to know a bit more about him and his past in future updates! Please look forward to it!! I've always been a fan of multi-faceted protagonists, so anticipate some intrigue!
No, thank you for reading it!!! <3
I hope it has brought you happiness and manifested new memories into your brain. :3
(P.S. It is symbolic of something, but you'll have to find out!!)
I really love what I've seen of this VN, aside from a few sections that could use some more efficient grammar, it's all great. All of it.
Now to wait for the next update, so that I can use the detonate button again after I'm done.
Thank you so much for reading my visual novel!! I’ve put a LOT of work into it, and I’m happy you’ve enjoyed it!! Yes, my apologies - my grammar may not be amazing at times, I just tend to write how I speak, if that makes sense!! It’s all very imperfect, just like me lol :)
Finally someone has mentioned the detonate button lmaooo, you’ll find out what it means in the future!! ❤️❤️
Honestly, that button was the first thing I tried and it really took me by surprise what you did there lol.
But don't worry too much about the grammar, just a handful of words at most that I thought could use some change, nothing major but overall I did like how you wrote and paced each scene so far.
Aaand just like that, you got yourself a rent free space in my mind, I'll definitely check it out when it's here!
Your game came out of nowhere for me, and I must admit the concept alone made me curious and I played it and I definitely enjoyed how you've built your story
Thank you so much for deciding to read my visual novel!! And thank you for the compliment! There’s much more to come, so I hope you find the multitude of concepts in my future updates satisfying as well!! ❤️❤️
Red Neo hahahahaha
It's darker, darker, creepier, it's the perfect color :)
hehehe, thank you! I’ve reworked all the sprites and changed colours and shiz. It’ll all be in the next update I’m working on right now!! Though I’m just about to update the existing one today, sprites only, so it’s not misleading lol
don't worry don't bother either as long as you take your time and don't stress the next update will be insane in my opinion :)
Naww, thanks man. I just released a patch with the updated sprites, but the update should be out soon! And yes, it is insane!!!!! Thank you for being interested in my stuff ❤️
Not gonna lie, I kinda liked Neo's original color scheme better. Though I respect the artistic choice to change it to red. Fits the character, seeing as red-colored blood is considered an anomaly and all.
Aww, thank you!! Yeah, his colour scheme has changed throughout the years, here’s a list in chronological order for your convenience!
The only reason I have decided to change his fur colour to red is because… I’ve changed. Neo is my fursona and I’m not the same as I used to be. Red and black are colours that I feel represent who I am now, and I also like red because it’s a bit more… masculine for him. Imo tho ❤️❤️
And yes, I also think it fits more with the aesthetic I’m going for!!
My only complaint is the red background of itch page hurts my eyes, not sure if intentional
yeah it was HAHAHA but I will change it now :)
(I just changed it to space black and it looks so much better)
Yeah black works ok! That red made me fuzzy for about 2 minutes
My apologies!! ❤️❤️
AAAHHH I'M SO LATE!
sorry for being so tardy.
Anyway, You've done it again, I'm absolutely blown away by everything you've wrote and THE MUSIC, oh the music is always top notch, I'll be waiting for day 4 AFTER the Christmas vacation's are over, so Kideshi I ask of you not to be so hard on yourself and get a nice winter vacation.
[SPOILERS AHEAD]
So first of all, I love the cooking tutorial with seth giving us a Kalightian Culinary class instead of the usual Biology one, which I still adore.
I hope we'll have more time to cook and eat whatever Seth and Neo made, especially if Seth will bend over every time to pick up a utensil~
hopefully though, next time we won't have to bleed by thinking of negative memory to get the sizzling started.
Oh my, the Endomycha scene, at least we got some new info about Seth's past and ahem kink cough* and by the way, I'm not sure if it was intentional or not but is the "sexy color gray" supposed to be a reference to 50 shades of gray? Either way *Vomits*
Hope you like the magazine I found laying on the ground of the treasure room. (That Demented shark on the ceiling gave me a such a scare that I stumbled down and found myself face to face on this very explicit magazine.)
Returning to the Endomycha scene, man oh man, The Jaw Divers are gonna have additional trauma on top of what they had plus I didn't expect that being horny woudld save us, but I ain't complaining especially with the view that I got~ *Whistle* I gotta give it to ya, those were some nice assets and rods that you've shown us, alas, if I could only touch them instead of just our own... nontheless, thanks for the show.
Now, talking about the music...
"Touch Me Lullaby" is such a song that I could describe such as a simple "laying in bed and listening to the rain outside hitting the glass accompanied by a broken Vinyl playing in the background" but I must interpret what I saw or felt during that lullaby.
It starts with a nice melody accompanied by a sound in the background that could be paragonized as the sound of the rain, soon after if I listen intently, I think I hear someone humming, now I'm envisioning 2 people that may be the same but not quite. The sound of the rain now is accompanied by a rumbling of a machine, the 2 of them are inside the car and as the young one sits in the back humming that song, the car moves faster and faster until it goes off from a bridge or a cliff and suddenly the melody becomes dull, like someone was drowning it, submerged into the water and it's not constant, It's like having brief flashes of memories of what happened before it all crashed down, repeating that nice lullaby on loop.
Sorry if I'm killing the mood like Reub'o but I just hope you've healed from whatever happened in year 12.
From what you've written anger seemed to be the solution against being depressed, and it might be a good one at the start but anger usually subsides after a short period of time, therefore Lust was the next solution which was more constant as we have more stuff to be horny instead of being angry at one thing for so long, yet I can't help that by the last part you've written, Companionship was the best thing someone like Neo could've ever got, especially since it's people who understand him, It's nice, I've quite teared up at that point. As always great job, You've created yourself a beautiful cult.
I'll be waiting patiently for day 4 and some explanations about the farm in which Seth was in, hopefully withouth encountering Siro, if we'll encounter him I'll personally give him a sucker punch for whatever he did to Seth.
P.S I'm gonna ruin the mood again, sorry. Again I noticed a misspelling before the treasure room and after the Endomycha scene. You wrote at the end "Roof aboce" I think you may have intended to write "Roof above".
It's really a minor error, not even worth noticing, so don't be hard on yourself
Okay first of all, I LOVE THAT MAGAZINE COVER HAHAHAHA
That's one of my favourite things evveeerrrrr!!! Thank you so much for putting time and effort in to make that!! I'm sorry I didn't reply earlier, I didn't get the notification at all! And please don't feel pressured to make things for me, just the fact that you read my visual novel is enough!! But I love your fanart and stuff so much, it makes me very happy to know I have real fans like you!!! :3
Yes, I put a lot of effort into the music - especially the little cutscene I did there! It took so long to get it timed just right - but I'm so happy you appreciate it! I even use the music player myself now when I'm coding!
{SPOILERS AHEAD]
Hehe, I enjoyed the cooking part! I just thought something nice and calming was appropriate before the storm that was the endomycha. HAHA, I did think about 50 shades actually in that joke. But I haven't watched it cause I'm gay.
HAHAHA, I see you've looked into the files to find that I called it a demented shark lol. It's so fuckin' gross but that's what aesthetic the Black Colony is going for! Horror and intimidation!!
Yessss... I'm still trying to get better at drawing, but I very much enjoyed drawing gay furry p***! I think the one of Lucifer was probably my best!! That whole thing with the endomycha was kind of a reflection of myself and how during my darkest times, my um, primal instincts have always been there to save me. Most of the time, anyway. And I think it's something people don't talk about enough considering it's completely normal and literally the main thing we're put on the planet to do/feel.
Thank you for that Touch Me Lullaby scene... that was really powerful, and very sad. I'm sorry that the stuff I've made has caused you to create such sad imagery. But you've done such an amazing job at capturing the essence of the song and its sadness... the lullaby itself is only a small snippet on loop of the original song, but... I felt it necessary to just keep it on a constant loop to ensure the reader feels uneasy and disoriented. To me, the song symbolises the last thing you hear before death - which is why I gave the option for you to choose to die while the song fades out and the game exits. I've been in that place myself so many times, so it's cathartic to be able to experience it in game.
Yes, Siro can go fuck himself. Don't worry we'll get to him and The Farm eventually!! Unfortunately, sometimes, when some Kalightians are grown, they come out as assholes who need to be put back in the ground :)
And thanks for the spelling error check!! I knew I would forget something!!
Again, thank you so much Bon! I'm sorry for the long message, but I had to reply to your entire comment! I look forward to them very much. But no pressure!! I'm currently working on the next update right now, and let me tell you, things are intense!! There's drama, tense situations, violence, crime and even more sexual stuff to come!! It's honestly one of the most jam-packed updates ever - and I've reworked every sprite! Please look forward to it!!
Thank you so much again <3 <3 <3
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Oh shucks (⁄ ⁄•⁄ω⁄•⁄ ⁄)
It's the least I could offer since reading your stuff actually helps me too, especially since it's something that a person who was close to death multiple times and the stuff you write it's not all "Doom and Gloom" so it really helps.
Shame my primal instincts are basically the same as B-man Philocision, meaning almost inexistent BUT not all is lost, I just gotta have confidence in myself (I've got to be more fierce if I wanna have a chance with the definition of "Potential boyfriend" of Reuben).
I'm also trying to get better at drawing, I hope that it won't disturb you if I use some of your sprites to get some of the fanarts done.
I'll get better at it and soon maybe I'll do something decent.
For now though, ENJOY THE CHRISTMAS! If I get any coal from santa I'll stash them until we see Siro so that I can throw them at him.
I'll be waiting, patiently and exitedly, for the next update.
TAKE CARE! AND HAPPY HOLIDAYS °˖✧◝(⁰▿⁰)◜✧˖° *Virtual hugs*
Naww, your drawings are awesome!! The one you did of Neo with the Sun Dagger was actually amazing!! To the point where I wanted to draw in that style too! The muzzle and the eyes were everything!! So don’t doubt yourself please!! It’s one of my favourite things!!
And of course you can use my sprites for fan art, I don’t mind! It’s just really flattering that someone even wants to make fan art of my work. :)
It’s okay! It’s hard to be confident when you feel like you’re not good enough… I know what that feels like all too well. But the more you try, the more likely you’ll succeed! Even if you fail at any of your endeavours, like I did for a very very long time, it’s never really a failure because you’re getting better each time! That’s what kept me at it, even when I just wanted to quit because it seemed like I could never get better.
And hey, it’s okay if you’re not comfortable with those instincts. It took me a very long time to be okay with it, you just have to embrace the innate joy in it and throw away the stigma!
You have a wonderful Christmas too, my wonderful fan!! And thank you for engaging in my work as always. I am forever grateful!!
(P.S. Don’t throw your coal at poor Siro!! Sharpen it, infuse it with iliocide and kill him instead. Gotta show mercy!!)
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Cause I love blood lololol 🩸🩸🩸
Neo has always been my fursona and that’s always been one of his weird quirks :)
Poor guy. At least it doesn't seem to hurt him.
nah he all G y’all 🩸🩸🩸
Holy...I am...still kinda recovering from the emotional whiplash here.
I don't wanna say too much cuz I don't wanna spoil things for others or rehash stuff I've already said in previous comments but hoo...
...Good stuff. Fucked up in more ways than one. But still good! Hope whatever you're going through right now isn't TOO horrible/serious. The only advice I can give is not to stress too much about getting updates out every month. I, for one, am totally enraptured with this story and while I'm eager to see more I'm also willing to wait as long as it takes.
As I hinted at in my little bit of fanfiction I wrote, I'm also going through a rough patch in my life, so I can sort of relate in a way? Probably nothing as serious as the trauma Neo and the gang have faced, but yeah. I'm constantly battling my own demons as well.
Hang in there! Like I said before you've got a big fan in me. Hope you're doing okay and looking forward to seeing more!
Thank you so much for your comment!! Yeah, this chapter was quite a roller coaster of emotions!! It was quite difficult to write due to how Neo’s feelings are a reflection of mine, and especially how horrifically dark it gets - but I’m so glad I wrote it. And thank you - although I would love to get out updates as soon as possible, I need to make sure I don’t overwork myself/stress myself out too much, which I tend to do regardless… but I’ll figure that out. Thank you for being such a big fan, and I hope the update was worth your while!! There’s a lot more to come ❤️❤️
So already the cooking tutorial I'm not going to give the details I had things that don't make you want to taste Seth and Neo's cooking it's even almost weird like a sort of panna gotta recipe but version of death but as my friend just said in the comment towards the bottom is true it was incredibly scary and sexy~~~ I don't think I'll see Seth Neo (Roy) Reuben B. MAN naked with their big package😂🤣
Thank you so much for reading!! Haha yes, that was a death version of a panna cotta. Very strange flavours in the Black Colony considering it’s all pretty much mud and ocean lolol
HAHAHAHA, I love that!! I had fun drawing their packages, as I’m a big fan of that specific area of the body :)
thank you for continuing to read my story!! ❤️❤️
I see :)
Well you really worked hard, I congratulate you, even the community definitely enjoyed DAY 3, honestly, but I don't think I'll see the naked characters hahah but good job.
Now to see for the rest and once again good work
and also added a gallery :)
You're always ahead, that's crazy ;(
:p
Thank you so much for reading Season May!! I definitely worked real hard on this update, with the music, the sprites/drawings, all of it!! And I’m glad you appreciate it!! There will be more to come ❤️❤️❤️
Really good and interesting novel the sprites look soo good i appreciate your hard work
Aww, thank you so much!! Lots of hard work put into this, even when I doubt myself. I'm just about to release the next update, so I hope you like it!! <3 <3 <3
I love it looking foward to see more of the boys the story and everything! I might have found the next boy's sprite in the files but i wont spoil him to others.
hahaha, I do have a couple of unfinished sprites in there!! They look much better now, and will be released in the next update, so please take a look!! And thank you for your comment. There’s a lot more to see!! ❤️❤️